Death
is not picky
The short story “The use
of force” has multiple themes that can be mentioned. The first one and most
obvious is the sickness that does not discriminate. I know that rich people,
even on those times had a huge advantage over the poor when it came to treating
diseases, but if it became so complicated that not even science was advanced
enough to treat it, then no money could save you. This is how I see the family
in the story: I do not know well if they were rich, but all I know is that they
had money enough to ask a doctor to go to their home to treat her daughter and
had some amenities there. We see in the story how the daughter contracted a
disease presumably untreatable and mortal, which supports that not even the rich
were safe from dying from a bad disease.
Another related theme of
the story is the illness in the time, which, in fact, was not that long ago. We
notice in the story how one of the parents say that a lot of kids at school
were sick with diphtheria and that is why they were afraid that their daughter
had it too. An interesting part of the story is how involved was the doctor
with his patients in a way and how he was so willing and desperate to stop the
disease, but his hands were practically tied to his back with this. He was so
involved and desperate that he was totally willing to use his physical force
for the greater good of the patient, as happened to the story. We can also see
the frustration when he couldn’t do anything for the patient. Personally, I did
not like that he used his strength on the girl but it was still good that he
cared so much. I believe that the doctor did the right thing because it was part of his responsibility to try his best to save the girl's life, and also, he was desperate and feeling frustrated. Anyways, that does not justify the method he used and he totally did not use the right method.
What really got my
attention was Mathilda, the couple’s daughter. She knew she was sick all the
time but I must say she was very innocent. It is as if the thought that if the
doctor could not certify the diphtheria then she did not have it. We may think
that it is ridiculous, but it is the way some people think in real life, although
in a smaller scale. Mathilda’s character really impressed me a lot and it hurt
me how in the end, she realized her whole world was falling apart and there was
nothing her family or her could do to stop it. It really was a pessimist story.
The story was short but
it was really good and it made you know and feel what the characters felt in
the situation, it really was as if you could be in their shoes for moments of
the story, which says a lot of the author's quality.
Howdy, partner!!
ReplyDeleteJust here for a little constructive criticism.
Aside from one or two grammatical errors, you have a good standing on perspective in this story. Try using transitional words when beginning a new paragraph so the reading is not so "jumpy" from one topic to another.
Hi! Actually you are not the first person who tells me about using transitional words at the beginning of a new paragraph, I will try to correct that in the next entries I write. Anyways, thank you for the criticism, it is well appreciated!
DeleteHowdy, partner!!
ReplyDeleteJust here for a little constructive criticism.
Aside from one or two grammatical errors, you have a good standing on perspective in this story. Try using transitional words when beginning a new paragraph so the reading is not so "jumpy" from one topic to another.
Hey, just wanted to say that the girl did suffer and it was obvious she was scared, but in a point she was also using force against the doctor because she wouldn't try to cooperate. And I guess she is innocent, and didn't thought there was a cure for her, but her attitude didn't help. Anyway, great analysis and overview of the story.
ReplyDeleteHello Crystal! As you said, the doctor didn't use the correct method for diagnosing the child and in turn her attitude was not the most appropriate, however, if you would had been the doctor, what method would you have tried to implement to try and diagnose the child?
ReplyDelete~~~Paula
I agree on the character's thoughts thing. i liked that.
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